Took the advice from the stream and reworked
Let us hear you!
Yes! Great job! I much prefer this rework! And well done for turning it around so quickly. This has actually made my day - I was worried the feedback was too critical and maybe you wouldn't take it onboard. I think it was just my mindset after the technically disastrous stream though!
I still find the volume drop at the beginning of the breakdown a touch odd, and would maybe have the synth that comes in louder rather than fading in, but it's definitely much better than before.
You've certainly kept the tripping out 4am vibe but I think it's got a nicer balance of randomness and consistency now.
I would probably add even more layers to the drums (tops etc.) to fill them out some more, but it's definitely better with what you've done. I'm looking forward to hearing how your music develops
updated by @robjones: 07/13/23 02:18:13PM