Took the advice from the stream and reworked
Let us hear you!
Theres some balancing issues I think I still have to address as far as the elements I added after the feedback I got today. Tried to work your advice into the production of this track and this is what I came out with.
In trying to keep with that "tripped out 4 am vibe I decided to keep that section at about 1 min in (mostly because its my favorite bit). I know its breakbeat but I added some more consistent hi hat elemts and tried to cut the length of the breakbeat sections to give it a more dance floor feel. I also tried to bring up the synth at 30 sec and add some more layers so that drop out isn't as abrupt but I don't know if that problem is still there.
uploaded the draft to my page on the community but won't ever be mad at someone giving me a soundcloud listen.
Appreciate all the guidance as I'm learning!
https://soundcloud.com/user-692447050/bleep/s-2kZIQGQ681d?si=1f5f313a3add4dd49389af1a7f00fe74&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Edit: the track rendered an extra 40 seconds. Will be corrected.
updated by @mindrip: 07/13/23 06:37:02AM